2007-5-12 10:12:00 |
| Yesterday I Very Happy |
Yesterday, I very happy. Beacuse my school give us a big and new bedroom. In the new bedroom, there are many big and new beds. And white walls, and two windows. In the new bedroom is cool, isn't hot. And it is beautiful. I like it very much. So yesterday I very happy. |
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2008-7-10 14:43:55 |
| Re:Yesterday I Very Happy |
 我是李思聪。4年级的时候，大家都胸无点墨，作文就别发表嘛！你不是满腹经纶吗？你是英语免试生啊！发点人中佳作嘛！！！！！！！
病句如下：
（1）beacuse my school give us a big andd new bedroom.
(2) in the new bedroom, there are many big and new beds.
(3) and white walls, and two windows.
(4) in the new bedroom is cool, isn't hot.
(5)yesterday, i very happy.
旁边的网友说也得对：“yesterday i was very happy.”，但他没有大写。 |
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2008-2-8 11:33:52 |
| Re:Yesterday I Very Happy |
写得很好，可惜有病句。应该是yesterday i was very happy. |
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2007-8-12 20:41:57 |
| Re:Yesterday I Very Happy |
  your english is good! |
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2007-8-2 14:44:34 |
| Re:Yesterday I Very Happy |
 期待分享你别的英文佳作,多写写,练练笔. |
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2007-5-27 21:11:17 |
| Re:Yesterday I Very Happy |
姐姐,你写得很好,让我学到了几个新单词,谢谢. |
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